Thursday, March 4, 2010

Essay 2 Dialogue

I have a kinda similar relationship with my father, the same way Sarah Vowell and her father do. In the story "Shooting Dad," Sarah and her father don't share hardly anything in common. They usually disagree on most things and have separate opinions, the only one thing they agree on is the constitution. Sarah doesn't seem to understand her fathers passion for guns. I am the same way with my father though. For me things didn't start off right away. When I was younger I would always do everything with my father. We would go hiking and go to different rivers for him to look for arrowheads, which is like Sarah's fathers gun to him. I was always really into doing it, I thought of it as spending time with my father. It was around the time that my brother was born that we stopped going on the hikes and going to the rivers. I don't know what it was, I think it was the fact that I was getting older and growing out of my tom boy phase. Around that time my father got really into politics, he would always try to talk to me about them or try to make me watch the news, and of course I never paid attention. To me it was a waste of time, but to my father it's like the most important thing. He always says to me, "Don't you wanna know what's going on in the world."

3 comments:

  1. Good start. I think you should consider a few more ways in which you are able to connect with Sarah. Maybe giving some more examples from the essay.

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  2. "Don't you want to know what is going on in the world? is a great intro for your essay. You obviously relate to Sarah Vowell by what you have said in your story. developing more information about how you and your dad connected and then did not connect so much might be something for you to look at. Good job so far.

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  3. Your quote at the end is one i could hear my own father saying. I would like to hear more about the similarities you share with Sara. and was there a certain point in your life when you realized something about you and your fathers similarities that changed your relationship?

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